How did this make an impact?

  1. In the grand design of things you actually receive a B+ just for hard work.
    Where you actually misplaced me personally was first in all the specifics.

    You know, as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details.
    .. And that could not be more true at this point.
    Having said that, let me inform you just what did give good results.
    The writing is actually highly powerful which is possibly why I am making the effort in order to comment.
    I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that.
    Second, while I can certainly notice a jumps in reason you make, I am
    not really certain of exactly how you appear to connect your ideas which inturn help to make the actual conclusion.
    For now I will subscribe to your point but wish
    in the foreseeable future you link your dots better.